Varying Sentence Length


In order to shake up your writing and to disrupt the usual rhythm of the sentences we write, we can vary the length of sentences. WHAM! A short sentence can make a big impact. A statement is made! It extends beyond the actual words chosen to express the ideas.

Take for example Ted Hughes' use of sentence length to build tension and add drama in The Iron Giant
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